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Wednesday 25 December 2019

Summer Learning Journey Activity 2 : The right to an education

T And Jack
One day there was two kids that went to the same college.
There names were T and Jack.
Those two kids always hangs out at the car park during school.
There favourite sport was Basketball.
They always played basketball at there school Courts.
But they didn't play at the courts during school they just only
played after school.
T was 12 years old and. He was really tall.
He looked like a fifteen year old.
When T and Jack hanged out at the Car park Jack asked
T if they wanted
to wag school and go Mcdonalds. T said to Jack nah i want to stay at
school to learn.
T also said yea i will come with you to Mcdonalds but only tonight.
So then Jack decided to wag school his self.
When Jack tried to wag school there were two Security Guards
guarding the gates for the Car Park.


Jack yelled out to T ohh no there are two security guards guarding the Gates.
T yelled back wait i will come.
When T reached jack T said i might as well come with you to Mcdonalds now.
Jack said ok lets sneak past the Security Guards.
Well they were sneaking past the two guards were a sleep.
So then when they got out of the gates they got excited.
Jack ran to the bus stop and waited for the bus. T chased after Jack.
T and Jack were having a race to the bus stop.


When they reached the bus stop they had to wait
a couple minutes for the bus.
When the bus arrived to them they both ran into the bus.
The two of them finded them a seat so they can sit.
They both enjoyed themselves until they saw these
college boys in the bus.
One of those college boys asked Jack for a fight.
Jack was scared he had to yell out to the bus driver stop the bus.
The bus driver heard Jack.
The bus stopped and then all of the people got out.
Jack said now do you wanna fight.
T said to the college boy nah my friend does not want a fight.
The college boy went for the first hook.
Jack dodged it and then punched the
college boys face.
That college boys face was bleeding hard.


Soon that day T and Jack decided to run away because
there were lots of College boys.
T and Jack had to run back to there school to get there boys to fight.
When they were running the other college boys
were chasing them.
Then they stopped because there were these other boys that were
walking down the street.
As T and Jack got closer to those boys they asked if they could help
them fight the other college.
They said sure let's go and beat them up. Smash,Boom, Ouchhh.
They were all on the floor.

T And Jack said thanks to those boys for helping them give the other
college a Hiden.
Those boys said your welcome.
Later that day they went back to their own school.
Finally they arrived back to there school. Everybody was so angry because
T and Jack Wagged school.

2 comments:

  1. Hey Tangi

    Congrats on another Summer Learning Journey Activity! I really enjoyed your story about T and Jack! It was really interesting and funny. I really liked the part when T and Jack asked those boys to help fight and they smashed the college boys. If you were the part of the boys who help smash the college kids, would you help T and Jack smash the college kids?

    Keep up the great work!

    Siosaia

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  2. Mōrena Tangi

    How're you going? We haven't heard from you in a while - I hope you're okay and that you'll be joining us again soon, I really thought you were going to finish the programme pretty quickly when I saw how active you were over Christmas!

    Thanks for this riveting, action-packed story about T and Jack, it sounds like quite the adventure! I really appreciate the length of your story, Tangi, what inspired the theme behind it?

    Although I love an action-packed story any day, do you really think that fighting is a great idea? It sounds like T and Jack were defending themselves originally, but then it reads as though Jack instigated the fight once they hopped off the bus - surely there could have been another way to resolve this issue without the use of fists.

    Really keen to hear your feedback on this and am looking forward to you returning to finish the mahi of this programme.

    Kia kaha,
    Jordan

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