Hi Tangimetua this is Mrs Collins from Manaiakalani and I'll be commenting on blogs over term break. Well done on posting and participating in the SLJ this year. I really like the poem you created about walking on the moon - would you REALLY like to walk on the moon? I'm not too sure I'd like the journey there... Keep blogging, and commenting on others, to increase your chance of winning one of the awesome prizes and to keep up your learning over the school break!
I'm back with another comment! Congrats on completing another Summer Learning Journey Task! I really loved how you made the words from your peom rhyme! Next time, Could you re-read your poem because I spotted a few mistakes. Besides that, Amazing work! If you actually had the chance, would you travel to the moon and why?
Hi Tangimetua this is Mrs Collins from Manaiakalani and I'll be commenting on blogs over term break. Well done on posting and participating in the SLJ this year. I really like the poem you created about walking on the moon - would you REALLY like to walk on the moon? I'm not too sure I'd like the journey there... Keep blogging, and commenting on others, to increase your chance of winning one of the awesome prizes and to keep up your learning over the school break!
ReplyDeleteHi Tangi!
ReplyDeleteI'm back with another comment! Congrats on completing another Summer Learning Journey Task! I really loved how you made the words from your peom rhyme! Next time, Could you re-read your poem because I spotted a few mistakes. Besides that, Amazing work! If you actually had the chance, would you travel to the moon and why?
Keep up the amazing work!
Siosaia
Hej Tangimetua,
ReplyDeleteOoo what kind of poem is this? And are you interested in space?
Great job on completing this activity!
Riiana